Under the water by Eden
I it was hard doing a lot of writing because I don't write a lot of writing.
It was easy doing the pictures on pixlr editor.
I learnt how to use Canva.
Hi my name is Ngaio, I like how you have used heaps of differint coulors on your Canva it is very creative. I think you should use more expretion in your writing!
Hi Eden i really loved your story because it was a cool creation and the writhing was so fantastic and i loved how you changed the colours but make sure you put fool stops from Julia.
Hi my name is Ngaio, I like how you have used heaps of differint coulors on your Canva it is very creative. I think you should use more expretion in your writing!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sophie and I like that you have done a creative fish and colourful fish next time you should try some more full stops.
ReplyDeleteHi Eden i really loved your story because it was a cool creation and the writhing was so fantastic and i loved how you changed the colours but make sure you put fool stops from Julia.
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