Welcome to my blog. I am at Kaniere School in Hokitika, NZ.
Hi Eden I like your story because it was really interesting and I really liked your writing.
I like the bit when you did dot dot dot! Its misterious. I loved your writing it really discribes what is happening.
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Hi Eden I like your story because it was really interesting and I really liked your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like the bit when you did dot dot dot! Its misterious. I loved your writing it really discribes what is happening.
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